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James Satan
12-07-2005, 17:53
ok, part one of the story, might be finished tomorrow, depends on how much time I can wrestle from work. hehe.


The Northern Wall. The last great bastion of defence unbroken by even the horrific destruction of the searing. It was of course weakened in some places, but even now the last battalions of Ascalon were patching the holes, fighting back the Charr as they built. As he stepped from the shadows of the gate, the warrior looked at the steps down to his right, then continued walking towards Warmaster Tydus who stood looking out over the barren desert.

The Princes' man smiled with his mouth, while his eyes locked onto the approaching figures' face to gauge his response. "Thank you for..." he began, but was rudely cut short:

"Go inside. I am here to remove your little problem"

Warmaster Tydus bowed his head briefly, and reached out his hand. The warrior stood like a metal plated statue, his platinum coloured armour shined and polished, yet soaking up the light like a reapers' aura. The band of gold around his greying temple gleaming dull in the deepening sunlight. Tydus dropped his gaze, and his hand, and strode past the man into the shadows of the keep. He briefly contemplated patting him on the shoulder as he passed, but thought better of it as he approached and saw the warrior stiffen.


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The hot, dry wind flicked a strand of hair from his face as he walked towards the battlements. He blinked the grit from his right eye. Loud metal cogs screamed as though in agony, as they slowly fell into action, as the main gates slowly closed behind him. A rumbling clanking signalled that the portcullis was also dropping into place.

No way back now. Commitment to the crown of Ascalon meant that he would now inevitably die fighting.

As he looked down on the soldiers mobilizing below he felt a brief pain in his gut, and instinct told him to move. He stepped to the right, felt the thick warm air part along the edge of the blade flying through his grey hair, sliding like treacle past his face, only missing by millimetres. He raised one eyebrow almost comically. The old witch had actually given him something useful after all. A precog stone bound on a tight leather strap hanging from his neck, actually doing what he was told it would do. So this is how it warns him... with cramps! In the twenty years he had spent as a warrior, nothing other than his wits and skill had kept him alive, and recently, he felt the pressures of increasing numbers of assassins and increasing numbers of Charr supporters all out for his blood. His royal blood, long diluted by ale and whores' diseases, and healers purifications.

His right hand snapped like an iron shackle around the assassins' wrist now moving past his left shoulder, his body moving only slightly as his left elbow came back viciously towards the face of his attacker. As face met with metal plate, he heard each snap and crack, splintering of bone as the assassins' nose and teeth let go their fragile hold on structure. As he expanded his chest, brought his muscles into action and moved his arms apart further fuelled by a brief anger he felt the sudden lack of resistance, and the sickening vibration through his arm of a human spine breaking just below the skull.

His anger was at his own failure to hear, to know the approach was in progress; his anger was that his attention was slipping. He should have heard the extra weight on one side of the portcullis as it clanged down into position carrying the assassin with it. He should have heard the slipper clad feet as they shuffled through the dust. Or maybe, he thought... maybe he had heard, but didn't really want to do anything about it. Maybe his time was almost over. Maybe his body; in its laziness, was trying to avoid the ordeal to come.

Releasing his grip, and returning almost to attention, the body slumped in a pile around his legs, like a dog curling up around his feet by the fire. The low hiss of air escaping the dead mans' lungs distorted to a sick gurgle by the new route of escape.

The Warrior stepped to the battlements and looked down. Stone devourers, those damn pests, were trying to fight off four Ascalon pikemen, trying to get to their wounded comrades lying in agony under the feet of the animals. The fight was interesting to watch, as for each step towards the devourers’ prey the pikemen took, another devourer would climb from the earth, while the two attempting to drag the semi-conscious wounded soldiers under the loose shale kept stopping, and looking at their clan attacking and clack their stingers together as if to cheer them on.

The old warrior bent down, and picked up the knife that had nearly separated his spinal cord from his head, and turned it over in his fingers. A Kryta blade, easy to see. The waves along the edges dripped a clear green fluid to the floor… Poison. Muttering, the old warrior flipped it over in his hand, reached back, and threw it hard into the throng below. Before it hit, he had already turned for the stairs, and as he took the first two, he heard the crack that told him it had hit its target, puncturing the spiny carapace at the only point it could, through one of the six beady little eyes at the front of the low-slung animal.

Forty steps in two seconds, thirty metres in three, and in three more, six devourers were removed from the trappings of their daily existence by his gleaming longsword. Once all fifteen were dispatched, the warrior stopped to listen, his head on one side… a strange fizzling, mixed with a kind of popping noise. He frowned, and indicated for all the remaining soldiers to step back. One devourer stood upright still, its limbs shaking, its’ dark green blood seeping from the base of a black hilt protruding from one of its many eye sockets. The Kryta blade. Its beady little black eyes roved left to right, up and down. The old man straightened, his eyes screwed up in the frown that took over his face and as the filthy carapace began to stretch as if the beast was sucking in all the air it could, he turned and ran.

One soldier was stupid enough to disobey the warrior, and had lingered quite close. The old man’s vision blurred at the edges with speed and as he rushed past the soldier he looked back briefly. A faint green glow had appeared around the upright devourer, moving slowly round and around like the belts of light circling the distant planets only ever visible at night, before the searing… Everything moved in slow motion, the soldier he passed looking at the expanding and crackling corpse, the change in his features as he realised that the warrior had left him, the slow landslide of his features as his brows knitted together and the opening of his mouth and eyes as his face twisted towards fear. The old warrior looked ahead once more, he knew what was coming…

*FOOOMPH*

Death Nova. He had seen the poison do its job only once before. That was the name his comrades had called it, the final effect of the horrific poison that the undead painted onto their weapons and arrows before the battle of Si’Kahn. Si’Kahn! Gods above and below, he had hoped that he would never remember that name once he had pushed it from his mind all those years ago… only to be remembered in the blackest night, on the nights when the wind howled in the trees and through the eaves and rattled the windows of the room in whatever inn he was in. When the screams of the dying and the already dead ripped through his whole blood and gore soaked body… and the nightmares woke him. Woke him from visions of the flurry of poison arrows raining down upon their lines, visions of the crowded lines of men scrambling in fear to escape the mutating twisted bodies of their own recently dead as they grew large and seeped green bubbling liquid from every orifice… Running before the inevitable explosive desecration of their friends and comrades bodies that would wound or kill anyone in its radius of effect.

The old man shook his head to clear it, but the screams were still there, ringing in his ears… He looked up; alarmed, and found that it was not the screams of the already dead that he heard, it was the screaming of the poor dying soldier caught within the blast. The other three soldiers were crouched around him, one trying to comfort, another trying to remember the healing spells they were all taught as children. His cracking voice stumbling over the words as if they were a shattered glass floor and his feet were bare. The warrior drew his sword as he approached, and the three soldiers each reached for their belt daggers, and stood up.

“Go back inside the wall. Go to the resurrection shrine and ask the healers to pray for him. Go now.”

As he spoke, he contemplated… he rarely spoke to others. Words were unnecessary when his family sword and the armour he wore spoke more to people than anything he could ever say. Only the idiots needed words to understand what he wanted them to do.

When the devourer had exploded, its carapace turned into deadly chunks and splinters of bone propelled through the air by boiling acidic poison. The man he stood over had been no more than two metres from the smoking slimy crater that existed where the disgusting creature had been. Half the injured mans skull had been removed by a particularly large chunk of carapace, all but one of his limbs were shredded, and the old man could see the green slime boiling up from within each of the horrific injuries the man had sustained. He waited for the three soldiers to get to a clear twenty feet away, then the tip of his sword came down and buried itself in the throat of the shattered man.. He sliced quickly across, noticing the green ooze that came away on his blade as well as the dark tacky smear of the man’s blood. If he decapitated the man completely, then the healers would not be able to resurrect him. He hoped that whatever enemy he fought that finally killed him for the first time would know this, and sever his head completely. The old man had no love of healers, or desire to return to life devoid of his own soul. “just a silly superstition” he had been told on numerous occasions, but he did not see why he should risk it. Instead he bore each of his old injuries and battle scars with pride, and the slight limp in his right leg after much exertion was a small price to pay for holding onto his shot at the afterlife.

He turned and walked briskly away from the gate, away from the corpses, away from the sound of a retching soldier, and into the Breach. After he had picked up the path and walked no more than a hundred metres, he heard the muffled whooshing pop that signalled the final effect of the poison on the man whose soul he had released to the ether.


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The dust caught in his throat, walking in this midday heat was pure torture in full plate armour. Luckily the armour was manufactured from rare elements and finest dwarven steel, so although heavy, it was surprisingly flexible, and it was as cold as glass against his skin even in this sweltering heat. Likewise, in the freezing, clammy sub-shiverpeak temperatures of the underworld, it trapped all the heat it possibly could. Clever dwarves. He even wished for a matching helm, if it would protect his head from the rays of the sun, but alas, he had run short of gold in recent years, and fought with his wits, not his armour. At least, that was the reason he gave for fighting bareheaded. He knew there was a certain amount of pride involved to fight with his mark of office clearly showing. Not many people even noticed the difference between his dull gold band, and the standard brass band that many of his clansmen wore. It afforded him both anonymity and recognition in the places where it truly mattered.

After what seemed like an eternity, he reached a huge rotting gate, suspended in a gigantic stone arch. He walked to his right a bit and suppressed a quick laugh. Whatever huge beast this gate was supposed to allow or to stop had obviously ignored the gate entirely, and ploughed clean through the wall beside it. Looking to the east, and then to the west the ancient wall was virtually non-existent apart from the occasional archway, where the stone was laid by master craftsmen at twice the thickness of the rest of the wall, over fifteen centuries earlier.

It was the original northern wall, created immediately after the first uprising of the Charr. Back when they were used as slaves and pack-animals, used to fetch and carry the masonry and other materials for their masters, the self-called “native” Ascalonians… Teachings of the slavery of the Charr; their bloody uprising, near extinction and ultimate banishment to the far north, and of course the construction of the first wall, was outlawed under King Athelron the Cruel, a mere four centuries ago when a new war was started. Although the beasts had learnt to live in harmony with nature once more, and had even started trading with the Ascalonians, a thousand years ago, King Athelron did not like the beasts living in such close proximity of the city of Ascalon, and one night, ordered his troops to filter through the battlements, into their camps and to burn it all to the ground. Three powerful elementalists from the council of elders stood amongst the battlements raining fire and lightning down upon the poor beasts, and together they conjured black demons from the rift to crush the beasts as quickly as they could.

Over three thousand peaceful Charr were killed that night, and the land was blasted to ash. Not even the dark stains of Charr blood that covered the grasslands were enough to quell the flames, and in the four centuries that followed, nothing seemed to want to grow in the wasteland. Pushed into the deserts of the north, the remaining Charr learnt to adapt; and so began the Charr’s appreciation of the fire gods that had decimated their population once more. Such black energy was used to summon the demons from the rift, the three elementalists were consumed by the magic that they used and were trapped on the walls as their summoned spawn destroyed much of the north sector of Ascalon city, and nearly the entire first great wall. The spell was only broken when a lone stranger fired three arrows at the three spellcasters and ended their lives along with the demons they had summoned. For this great and selfless act that saved Ascalon once more, the stranger was tortured and executed under the direct supervision of King Athelron, and his ruined body displayed at the gates of the city for the remainder of the cruel kings’ reign.

The lone Warrior shook his head and rubbed his eyes. The construction of the second wall had been build straight through the city of Ascalon, in great haste, so that the Ascalonians could feel safe from the risk of Charr invasion in such a time of ruin, rebuilding and bad monarchy. It was why the city was now so small, being trapped between the wall, the lakes and the nearby hills. It could never grow to rival even the medium sized city of Shi-ConTaa, the city named “little town on the sea” a small coastal dwelling on the home shores of Cantha.


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He gripped the lever in one hand and decided to try it. With some gentle persuasion, the lever made a crunching noise, and deep underground the rumblings of the gears and counterweights slowly came to life. The huge wooden doors swung open to reveal nothing but more heat blasted dusty landscape.

The distant sound of battle came to his ears. A fizzling noise, followed by the unmistakeable acrid smell of burnt air; a sure sign of a spellcaster, followed by animal squeals, grunts and grinding of stone one stone.

The warrior had been in these parts before, and knew all too well of the hatred that the Grawl and the Gargoyles had for one another. Their animosity was well documented in all the towns and cities. It was almost humorous that they continued to live in such close proximity to one another throughout the lands, yet failed to wipe each other out, even in their constant skirmishes… each simply being a problem for humans in different areas wherever you went. Their natural hatred of one another meant that the creatures kept their own numbers under control without too much human intervention though, which was always a good thing.

The blackened sludge yielded like soft feathers to his feet, when he first stepped into the dark river, yet clung to him like glue whenever he tried to move forward. It was hard to approach the skirmish from the rear and in silence when every step he took made a squelching, sucking noise. A few tacky bubbles floated to the surface only a few feet in front of him, and instinctively the old warrior’s sword flashed out and down. He felt it slip from what it hit, and felt the shifting of the beast under the sludge as it reared to attack him. Taking one step back, he raised his heavy sword and swung with all his force into the slime. Black gunk splashed up to cover his gleaming armour as he sliced through the tar-pit and his sword bit deep into the back of the creature under the slimy layer. The force of the blow pushed the creature to the rock bottom of the river, and the momentum drove the old man to topple forward, his full weight going through the sword, finally splitting through the hard flesh of the thing and impaling it. A few seconds of thrashing later, and it lay still. A sticky bubble rose slowly to the surface and popped unceremoniously as he drew his sword from its new sheath below the sludge, and approached the skirmish once more.


to be continued...

Ragnarok-
13-07-2005, 09:13
This was good, although it was confusing in some parts, but when i went back and re-read them they made perfect sense. Keep it coming!

James Satan
13-07-2005, 10:40
This was good, although it was confusing in some parts, but when i went back and re-read them they made perfect sense. Keep it coming!

thanks!

Was having problems integrating the history sections into the main story, so I dumbed it down a bit and removed a lot of it. But all it seems to need now is to be read a little closer. Its what the dividers are for as well, to break up the action and make it clear that each section requires a deep breath before reading on. hehe. Obviously, am using a few of the "real" skills, but adding my own take on how they could come around (death nova as a result of poison for example)

I wonder how long I can edit for, if I notice something I need to alter...?

James Satan
14-07-2005, 16:41
Part II

He pushed on fast, aware the noise he had made would already have alerted anyone who cared to notice. Taking large sloshing steps, the tar almost up to his waist now, he forced his way through the sludge around the bend in the river, walls of sheer rock at least eight feet high on either side preventing him from climbing out.

Sounds and smells of fighting reached him quickly... the sound of steel, no… iron on stone, yelps, beeps and braying roars; the cloying flavour of the stench of spilt animal blood catching in the back of his throat, the sharp tingling sensation in his nostrils of freshly broken stone. The river widened into what was best described a large puddle of shimmering black water. It had a narrow dusty path around it, and for some reason, the grawl and gargoyles had chosen this as the battleground. Thirty on either side bashed randomly at one another, grawl shamen muttering strings of guttural phrases that no human could ever pronounce, a solitary resurrect gargoyle sitting atop the banks overlooking the fray and barking the occasional phrase to make the dusty rubble pull itself back together in the form of yet another stone foe.

It was clear which side was winning… for every enemy limb the grawl turned to rubble, they would sustain a horrifying wound. For every wound inflicted, one of the shamen would flinch and attempt to close it as soon as it occurred. A funny sight, almost, the grey stinking tendrils of flesh knitting together again almost as soon as the gargoyles’ diamond sharp claws had left its deep tear through muscle and thick hide.

His sword loosely held in his right hand, he meditated for the shortest time. Clear the mind, clear the spirit and RUN. Even through the slime, restricted from the waist down, the speed increase he used was enough to make his vision wobble and the enemies start to move at the speed of a slinurg, repulsive slimy little creatures that they were… his blade came up and took the shaman in the throat as he passed, his thick leathery skin, hard cartilage and sinew parted so fast; the blade biting so deep in so short a time, that the vibration of the impact didn’t even reach the warrior’s hands until he had withdrawn the blade and was halfway up the path ahead.

He closed his eyes for a second and turned around. It was as he expected. The solitary grawl that had tried to follow the blur moving through their ranks had turned back to the nearest foe after no more than ten steps. He looked from his new perspective at the battle, analysed the slow decay of the grawl forces. Down another healer and they had already dropped to no more than 15, still fighting over 25 gargoyles.

Directly across from him, on the opposite bank, sat the resurrect gargoyle. It looked like it was smiling. Smiling back, the old warrior reached down, and picked up a smooth flat rock from the ground between his feet. He crouched, reached behind him and pulled a small pouch from where it was carefully strung between the plates of his armour.

A high pitched honk of fear and pain signalled the end of the second of the three grawl shamen… it was now or never, the battle was turning, and the grawl were nearly defeated. The fighting was intensifying, both sides concentrating singlemindedly on sheer survival or total supremacy. The black sludge was clearly diluted by the blood of the beasts in places, and a light grey sparkling powder glinted in the midday sun as it coated the entire black and red mess. Tipping the contents of the tiny pouch into his hand, he took one of the small glowing blue stones, and dropped the rest back into the pouch. He took the large yellow stone he had selected, and quickly carved the sigil of a major rune of smiting into it. The rune glowed a bright, clean blue and then, as he pressed the tiny blue stone to its work, it dissolved, and fled inside the rock like a single bead of water being soaked up by a sponge.


Twelve seconds. He threw the rock to the resurrect gargoyle, as if it were a small and important gift.

Ten seconds. The gargoyle caught the rock, and looked up at the old man, standing there, grinning like a fool. The human lifted its arm and waved it floppily from side to side. Looking back to the fight below, the gargoyle reasoned (slowly) that it had time to inspect this gift, as not many of its’ comrades were on the floor, and the Grawl numbers were dwindling.

Eight seconds. The gargoyle flipped the small rock over in its fingers… a strange light blue glow came from a small insignia on one side. The gargoyle watched the light until it died…

Four seconds. The rock was small, dull and had stopped glowing. In fact, the gargoyle could not even see the carved lines that were so clear before. It flipped the uninteresting rock over its shoulder. Maybe… maybe it had dropped the pretty rock onto the floor it thought. It looked between its feet, crouched as it was…

Two seconds. The gargoyle looked up. The human was no-where to be seen. This was good. Humans were bad enemies. They did not bleed like soft stinking grawl. They often had skin of steel and shiny minerals. Some of the softer humans were able to pick up two gargoyles at once and throw them fifty feet! Such incredible strength and some had very…

The gargoyle thought process was very slow, and their attention span short. Sometimes, thought the warrior, killing gargoyles was like kicking a three month old wolf cub. Even with his hands pressed to his ears, and his eyes tightly shut, the screaming roar of the explosion still rattled his skull, and made his ears whine. The white-blue glare forced its way straight through his eyelids, though his back was turned and he had moved down the far side of the bank into cover. Small pebbles rained down on his head. Clouds of billowing dust rushed past him, as he tried not to breathe.

Standing slowly, and turning around, he made his way back up the bank. Only about half the original path on his side of the valley’s battle remained. The river of tar, burning gently with flickering blue and yellow flames, flowed slowly down into a perfectly formed circular crater at least 100 feet across, and twenty feet deep that, smoking, though it was, was otherwise clean cut into the floor of the desert. No sign of the battle remained except for the occasional blackened rock piece of gargoyle, no bigger than a childs fist, spread out around the sides of the crater. When the foul river had slowly filled the crater, not even those sparse traces would remain. The old warrior shrugged, although the blast meant that he had no way to cross back this way, he had no intention of backtracking anyway. Hopefully in the future only the old, and more foolish humans would enter such a large tar pit, as the steep sides would mean no-one would ever get out again. He did not particularly care about that consequence, but took solace anyway in the fact that grawl and gargoyles inhabited these parts, and had a greater love of wading through the sticky black stuff than humans.

Squinting in the sun, and frowning grimly, the warrior turned and trudged to the north once more.


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The sun had climbed in the sky, and begun to fall again before the old warrior found what he was looking for. Traces of the Charr war band he was here to “report” on. Reports had been coming into Ascalon city (although from what sources, had not been digressed) that the Charr were forming a strike force from the houses of three elite warriors. It would consist of approximately 20 Blade Storm warriors, four expert healers and a small band of ten archers. They were to be led by three from the council of fire. The fear was that this enormously well trained unit would be able to punch holes in the great wall at will and lay waste to the royal palace. The loss of such an icon would be untenable to the king, and so he had sent for the old man to go and “take a look” as Adelburn had called it.

The warrior knew the truth. He knew the king had sent him out here to die. He must have found out about the old man’s birthright, about his uncanny knack of staying alive all these years in impossible situations. He must have found out that he was also…

He shook the thoughts from his head. No time for that now. What is destined must be done.

The unmistakeable scent of Charr spoor filtered through the dust to his nostrils. Instantly he was alert, eyes scanning each potential hiding place and shadow. In his prime, he could have single-handedly dispatched a group of 50 of the beasts in direct combat, as long as none of them tried sneak attacks. In the old days, direct confrontation was all the Charr knew, but in recent years, elders from the council of fire had diluted their ranks with the scum of humanity, and so the human frailties of tactics and sneak, surprise confrontation had filtered through the armies of the Charr. They were never deadlier than now. When they had learned more than a beast’s grasp of warfare... when they learned to clad these new “blade storm” warriors in steel plate… they became the most fearful army ever to march on Ascalon city.

Inhaling deeply, the scent told him secrets most men would never know... two days old… an attempt had been made to disguise the location of the droppings. Spoor beetles were already moving it and nesting, so there would be no way to tell which way the Charr had gone. There was no need to hunt out the spoor’s location, he knew all that it could tell him from his nose alone.


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Through one half open eye, she watched the old warrior walk away, down the path. She was sure he had stopped and caught the scent of something, but she could not smell whatever it was that he had. She had never known a warrior that bore any attention whatsoever to the tracking skills he had so clearly shown. The very way he moved so lightly as he walked seemed to her eye to be the result of years of training. The way he held his body showed no lack of muscle, no infirmity of age. Her job was going to be more difficult than her employer had admitted.

The sand dune’s side rippled slightly, then part of it dislodged and slid forward as the figure under the sand sat up, the fine sand sliding from her hair and clothing like water. She pulled back the finely woven cloth covering her face, and looked at the old mans footprints moving clearly down the path ahead of her. “you’re not the only one who knows how to track, old man” she whispered to herself, as she stood up, the fine, supple black leather of her clothing losing all trace of being buried in the sand. The quiver strapped to her leg rattled slightly as she leant back into the pit to retrieve her bow, and hissed slowly as the sand drained from a small hole in its bottom. Crouching, she checked each fletching in turn, and finally satisfied, began to move silently along the path.

James Satan
18-07-2005, 17:16
should I continue? or is it too boring?

Michal
18-07-2005, 21:20
continue!!!!! its brilliant!

oney
25-07-2005, 07:42
Keep on going i like it.
That old warrior is cool :happy34:

James Satan
29-07-2005, 14:03
Hi guys- just a quick note to let you know I have sketched out all the way to the end of the story, but I've been too busy lately to spend the time on actually writing it. Thanks for the comments- I know most people who look, don't post.

I'll be back with chapter 3 asaipc.

Oh.. and I might (MIGHT) be able to supply some pictures to go with the story at some point. (just to whet you're appetite for more, although someone will need to give me a hand with hosting the pics (pm me please with suggestions- don't write them on this thread pls)

MonkeyDude
31-07-2005, 05:29
You made this story up ? How long did it take you to type this all up ?

liamSlayer
31-07-2005, 12:36
must of took you adges to do that its awsome though keep writting :happy34:

Zero
31-07-2005, 16:35
Well done so far, extremely good. Don't worry about the feedback (or lack of) when starting, FanFiction forums tend to be abit slow for feedback sadly, have to fix that ;) keep up the good work :thumbsup:

James Satan
12-08-2005, 11:25
Part III

Something was wrong. The old warrior had no idea what it was, but he felt the bile rise into the back of his throat. He froze in the middle of the path, and swallowed hard, determined not to choke or vomit. A prickly tingle spread from his spine out across his shoulders and down his back, beading sweat trickling along the same path, soaking through the thin linen shirt and slickly painting the insides of his armour. His eyes watered slightly as the pain in his guts made him want to double over. His heart beat so loudly he could swear it would soon give him away, should anyone be within earshot. Crouching, his breathing shallow, he pressed on, faster, the loose grip on his sword hilt tightening with every step… Each step making the sensations of panic and cold dread take greater hold on him.

Ahead, the sandy path gave way slowly to rock, and the decayed remains of once great buildings. Temples to Dwayna had once existed out here, millennia ago. Built by the gods themselves, or so it was said. Before the reign of man, that was certain. Like the great statues of the crystal desert, no human had knowledge of how they were constructed… no human, and surely no beast of Tyria had the ability to build them now. They surely had to be simply thought into existence by the gods.


Reaching the shattered corner of a small building ahead, he eased himself around it, leant back on the wall and panted. What in the name of Grenth himself was making him feel this way? Suddenly, his tightly squeezed eyes sprang open in realisation. He deftly removed one gauntlet. Reaching swiftly to his neck, his fingers found the leather cord there. He lifted the necklace over his head and passed the precog stone to his (still metal clad) hand. The sensations passed far more quickly than they had come. With a puzzled expression, the old man picked up the small, dusky pink, many sided stone with his unclothed hand, and immediately the bile rose again in his throat. As he gripped it harder, the sickening feeling intensified. Reflexively, he flung the stone to the ground.

He smiled grimly. The stone worked much better than the old woman had predicted... He felt a brief passing shame that he could never tell the old woman of her success, or repay her kindness. Although he didn’t need the stone to tell him… It was a good day to die.

The warrior sheathed his sword and took two steps from the walls cover.

Tzrrrzzipp tzzzzzzip-ip

The first arrow struck him perfectly behind the knee, the tip breaking through the chainmail behind the tiniest slit in the joints of his armour, the perfect path it flew severing muscle and sinew; and as he began to topple over, two more hit him simultaneously between the shoulder blades on either side of the spine with deadly practised accuracy.


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She had been tracking the old man for over an hour now, and she watched him with a quizzical look on her face as he stumbled to the ruined building and fell inside. She used the time to gain the distance she had lost until she sat, bow taut and arrow strung, less that fifteen feet from where he rested. When he’d come out of there, she would first cripple him, spin her bow onto its side, then put two arrows in his back. She had already split the fletching on one of the two arrows, and they stood upright in the ground before her... The plan had gone perfectly, and the old man had gone down without a sound. The perfect kill; and her first human target. She let the edges of a smile dance across her lips. It was getting easier. The Assassins of Grenth were sure to invite her to their guild now that she had accomplished her task. Only one thing left to do now, and that was easy. She needed proof of the completion of her task.

Slinging her bow over one shoulder, she approached the old man’s corpse and drew her dagger. She only needed one lock of his grey hair to prove her worth. But as she approached, a sparkle caught her eye. Something to her right… something laying in the sand. A beautiful stone, and a leather cord binding it. She knelt down beside the body. Three arrows stood at 90 degree angles from the ground. She nodded her head quickly in reverence, and sliced off the hair she needed. She placed it in a small pouch and tucked that into her belt. She looked around, and listened for a second or two. Her eyes were drawn to the arrows in the top of the old mans back, and she wondered for a second whether to retrieve her black fletched shafts… the heads would be ruined though. A dark stain was slowly spreading through the old mans white cloak that lay draped over his immobile body like a shroud. Shivering, she stood, and took four quick steps to the trinket on the ground.

Bending over, she took hold of the leather cord, and lifted the pretty pink stone from the ground. Dangling it in front of her face, she watched the light dance off its many surfaces, and seem to move around inside. She let go the cord, and caught the stone in her other hand. Immediately a wave of pure nausea gripped her, blood rushing in her ears… she involuntarily gripped the stone tightly in her hand, as she stumbled to her knees, and screwed up her face as she whimpered. Her eyes snapped wide as true agony suddenly struck her gut, like a flaming brand shoved into her skin and as she looked down in amazement, the stone slipping from her fingers, the sharp, gleaming tip of a silver blade parted the strong leather covering her abdomen, the sword slicing through flesh and armour with a fine hissing noise, like scissors on silk…

The old man grunted as his blade broke through the far side of his enemy, and shifted his weight backwards to lift the foul assassin from the ground. He sliced upwards as he withdrew the sword, until he felt the blade slide off the bones of her ribcage, the woman’s body collapsed like a rag doll, thick dark liquid quickly flowing from her wound to paint the sandy floor. Her arm fell away from her body and he stood for a few moments, heavy booted foot on her hip to hold her still… watching and waiting, as the assassin twitched on the floor, and the light faded from her pretty eyes.


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“Stupid girl”, the warrior muttered as he used his sword to displace the arrows that had barely broken the skin of his back. She should have realised that the back of warriors armour is always stronger than the front. Even when the tips of arrows are made out of blackened Thornwood, they are never going to penetrate deldrimor steel, and seeing as she’d tracked him in this heat for more than two hours, she should have recognised what he was wearing by now. She had lucky hits, to strike twice through the overlaps in his plate - even so; the one that did penetrate his back had been nothing more than a flesh wound. She had been close when she fired. In his youth, he could have made those shots too. Pride was her downfall. She had aimed for where she thought weaknesses in his armour lay, and put faith in her accuracy, instead of taking the only sensible shot- the back of his unprotected head.

Muttering the incantation of healing, he yanked the black tipped arrow from the back of his left knee, his face barely showing the discomfort as the tendons knitted, the flesh melted back together. Many years of warfare had taught him a good knowledge of monk skills, and after the very first time he had been wounded in battle, he had remembered the monk’s works, and when repeating them later, found that he could make them work too. There was nothing spiritual, or divine about it. Pretentious monks. Pah! He spat in the dust.

He looked up to the skies. The sun was low in its path across the heavens, and meant only a few hours of daylight remained. No matter. He was close now…

James Satan
12-08-2005, 15:07
final part on its way soon, only needs flesh on the bones.

*edit* just thought.. is there a word limit on a post? if so, I will create a new thread for the full story... I made quite a few small edits to the earlier posted parts. I'll wait until I get a few screenshots first though- need to advertise for actors! hehe

Ragnarok-
14-08-2005, 07:21
final part on its way soon, only needs flesh on the bones.

*edit* just thought.. is there a word limit on a post? if so, I will create a new thread for the full story... I made quite a few small edits to the earlier posted parts. I'll wait until I get a few screenshots first though- need to advertise for actors! hehe

Great story so far... CAn't wait to see the final thing! And I think there's no word max on these posts, so have fun!

James Satan
28-09-2005, 18:10
ok, final part of the story is finally here.. sorry for the wait.

the whole story is also posted in its entirety under the title "the northern wall- complete" with a few major and a few minor alterations.

(go read that one instead)

Part IV

Darkness fell like an icy blanket across the desert. The old man rolled the bodies of the Charr patrol down the side of the path to the rolling dunes below. With the assistance of night, nothing would find those bodies. Not until after he had done what he came to do.

The Charr were not renowned for good night vision, but his tired old eyes were not much better. He knew he would have at least a slight advantage in the dark. As he approached the crest of the next sand dune, he lay on his belly and shuffled into a position overlooking the whole Charr camp. Before he even reached the top of the dune he lay on he had realised this was no mere war party. The sounds of a smithy were audible for at least half a mile around, the clinking of metal on metal, the bellows forcing the fire to roar and the whoosh of hot metal thrust into sand. The vast fires of the encampment spread their light amongst the long shadows of the night, like the arms of a spider, painted in negative across the dunes. Vast numbers of Charr warriors lumbered like docile herd beasts around the blazing cooking fires. The scents of cooking meats and burning charcoal reached the old mans nose, and he realised he had not eaten since two days past.

Long war banners flapped in the light breeze, and huge tents dotted the edges of the camp. One large round tent stood in the middle of the entire camp, and a fire clearly burned within it. Odd shadows played across the material seemingly randomly, and human-like shapes moved intermittently inside. A single Charr Martyr, dressed in greys with fine beads hanging off his body clinked slowly towards one of the larger tents on the outskirts of the camp, carrying a blazing torch and a platter of food with it, lighting the torches on the path as it went.

The warrior suppressed a smile. One beast had led him straight to the tent with the healers in it. Every human knew the Charr healers were deeply religious and mostly solitary animals, preferring to keep to their own, and pray to their gods behind closed doors, rather than mix with other Charr until they had to. Lighting those torches would help him distinguish which tent he needed to… investigate; once he had repositioned and was approaching the camp from an easier direction.


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An hour passed… then two. The Charr martyr had not emerged from the tent, so it must be the one where it was to spend the night. The old warrior slipped quietly down the embankment and towards the camp.

He silently ran his short knife through the back of the tent. The material parted soundlessly from floor to six feet high. Sword drawn in his right hand, dagger in his left, with his shield slung over his back, he stepped through the opening.

Blanket rolls surrounded him on either side. A cloth partition hung in drapes about two thirds of the way down the tent. Charr martyrs, healers, young Charr apprentices lay at his feet in all directions. He sheathed his sword; quickly he knelt, grabbed a handful of blanket and smothered the first Charr at his feet as he slit its throat. Continuing his grizzly task, he worked his way from one side of the tent to the other, the only noise he made as he went; a wet crunch followed by nothing more than a hissing of releasing air. When only two were left, a sudden noise in the far compartment grabbed his attention. A shadow quickly approached and the cloth drapes were whisked aside and in the opening stood the largest healer Charr the old man had ever laid eyes on. His fur was grey, the beard plaited and adorned with the finest jewels in the kingdom. Unmistakeable in his finery, the giant healer could only be one thing - the Charr patriarch; leader of the Charr Healing temple… Few humans had seen the patriarch in their home city above the desert, beyond the mountains and survived long enough to report back to the world of humans of his very existence, and no more would. The old mans dagger was whistling through the air before the patriarch even came fully into view, by the time the drapes were fully pulled back, the blade cracked open his skull, and with a loud braying shriek of pain, the patriarch fell back into his bed.

Instantly, the two remaining Charr were awake. Smelling the blood of their comrades before their eyes fully cleared; their squeals and shrieks of fear cut through the night like a knife. Sliding his long sword from its small leather buckle at his waste, he quickly dispatched the last two healers before they managed to scramble from their bedrolls. A commotion was going on outside the main entrance to the tent. A large clawed, hairy paw reached through the sagging material of the entrance as the old warrior slashed a diagonal hole in the nearest wall, throwing himself through from the tent into the camp.

If he could only get to the tent in the centre of the camp, if he could only kill those leaders from the temple of fire... perhaps they had a chance. Perhaps this legion of Charr could be broken on the gates of the wall like so many other waves of enemies before them. Killing their healers had been a useful sideline… but the old man knew beyond a shadow of a doubt it was not enough. Each beast here would kill a dozen men, women and children before blood loss from a deep wound even slowed it. Without organised resistance, the human population of Ascalon would be wiped away without trace. Although Prince Rurik had tried in recent months to organise that very resistance, the old man knew he had met stiff opposition from his own father, the King, at every step of the way. There was no way he could let these beasts get their fiery leaders within a stones throw of the gates.


He broke into a run. The din behind him increased, and a war horn sounded across the stillness of the night desert. Within seconds, all the tents were alive with noise, the army of beasts awake, and angry. He reached the bottom of a row of tents and turned to his right... slashing at the supports as he went, tents toppling behind him like discarded heavy blankets thrown onto their occupants, as he ran on. He looked back, and sure enough, more than five Charr warriors were in pursuit. He turned between a gap in the tents, and not more than ten steps in front of him stood yet another guard. He turned and ran across the path to his right, more warriors. He drew his sword in a circle around his feet, slicing through three tents moorings, each one surrounding him slowly toppling away to leave him standing there, surrounded by an off-white floor.

They weren’t approaching. They just stood there. The old man looked down along the edge of his blade. Perfect. Not a nick, not a scrape, not a dent. In the dull moonlight and low orange glow of nearby fires, the blade seemed to glow brilliant silver. The sword of his ancestors, of his line. And the line ended with him.


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A dozen… Three dozen... Far more. The fire-lit paths between the distant tents became dark with the press of the large hairy bodies. All armed to the teeth. All advancing on him slowly. The white expanse of tents littering the floor was ripped from their pinning, their bulk dragged away to clear a space… He raised an eyebrow… This was new. They fanned out, circling him, all of them an even distance. Never had he seen this much restraint shown from the bloodthirsty Charr warriors. He slowly turned on the spot, eyes scanning the lines of Charr for the first threat. With grunts and whinnies, they raised their collection of weapons to defensive positions and charged him as if all were the limbs of one single enemy..


One Charr, larger and faster than the others had moved further towards him than the rest. This was what he remembered, thought the old man, as his sword struck twice, removing the large Charr’s leg and head in succession. Blood spattered on his gleaming armour, to slide off like water. Two more Charr dropped faster than the blink of an eye, then three more. None had even managed a single strike against him yet.


As the beasts charged in to swamp him, the old mans’ sword flashed out… In front, behind, to the left, right, left again, throat, eye, wrist, thigh, throat, faster, faster, until the steel white blur around him began to drive back the pressing bodies, or at least cause the ones pressing in to collapse in surprise, agony and death. Hundred Blades, they had called this skill at the academy, and he had always been the best swordsman in his class. Besting his teachers on many more than one occasion, they had grown to show a grudging respect for the boy, even at that age. Decades later, all he could think of was that they would all be dead by now, those great swordsmen and women, that none could see him perform this great service to the so called “King” of Tyria.


Distracted, the blows slowed, and once more the Charr pressed in. He felt the dull impact as an old rusty axe slid off his platemail to his rear, one slid off his right knee… he raised his shield and twirled, just in time to see the dull silver glint from a massive Sephis axe slip over his left shoulder, narrowly missing his head, and bite deep into his shield arm. Sparks flew as the Dwarven steel cleft apart, loud grunts from all around him let him know that the crowd had finally realised that he was not invincible, he was only clad in a suit of steel. He raised his shield again, as the Charr warrior struck a second time, but his fingers loosened their grip, the shield slid from his hand as the axe fell.


It was a trade-off… he knew it in his mind, as he lifted his shield arm to meet the enemy blade. As the axe sliced deep into his wrist, the pain was already partitioned away inside his mind, the red heat of pain shut behind the closed doors of anger. As the axe fell, his sword was already moving, as the axe bit deep, so did his sword. Swinging the blade diagonally up, he severed the giant Charr warriors’ skull between the eyes, and the metal plate that covered it from neck to temple. The sephis axe clatterred to the ground, and he killed all that approached to reclaim it. With a dark look in his eyes, he began a faster dance. Soon Charr bodies were piled so deep around him that newcomers to the fight had to climb over the bodies of the dead, just to see the old man, just to get close enough to shove aside their brethren and swing their axes and clubs at him. Soon, he was facing more than twenty axes and clubs at once, only his sheer determination keeping him standing as they all clanged into his armour at once, his sword and damaged arm protecting his head. The old man lost his footing, and stumbled to one knee, the blows raining down faster and faster threatening to bash him into the very earth he knelt on.


All of a sudden, the furious blows stopped… The Charr drew away from him as one. The old man took a flurry of cheap swings as they pulled back, blinding one and taking the throats from two more, inflicting a gash here, a deep wound there... The Charr moved back, dragging the bodies of the dead with them. A channel in the throng opened up in front. A shorter, uglier Charr draped in finery stood at the end of the passage of fur, matted blood and iron. Dark banal glinting animal eyes turned away from him as one. All eyes were on the Flame Keeper.


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As he approached, the old man noticed that two more Flame keepers were walking behind this one. In single file they approached to within fifteen feet, then fanned out. The old man nodded to them, he knew what was coming. Hauling himself to his feet, he brought his sword arm in, towards his chest, the tip of his blade pointing skyward. He saluted as he cleared his mind.


Flames danced in the palms of the three hairy little beasts. As they each brought their hands together, dark orange balls appeared within their grasp. As one, three fireballs suddenly hovered in the air before him and flew towards him with speeds the fastest bow could not reproduce. He opened his eyes, and brought his stump of a forearm up to deflect the first. The heat seared his wound closed, and he quickly moved his arm backwards to let the fireball pass. A dirty little Charr ash walker behind him caught the fireball with his face, bellowed in agony and dropped to the ground as his whole body ignited. The crowd parted for an instant, until the magical flames had gone out, and pressed in once more. The second fireball erupted on the tip of his sword, spreading magical fire harmlessly down the length of the blade, and the third he simply dodged.


The three ugly little Charr exchanged glances… and began their chants again. The old man flipped an axe from the floor onto his boot, and shoving his longsword into the ground, flipped it from his boot to his hand. The middle Flame Keeper’s eyes showed his fear, widening until the whites became visible around the massive dark iris. As the axe struck him hard in the chest, he toppled over, those eyes still wide, but staring at nothing but the deep blackness of the sky. Two more fireballs rushed towards him again, and deflecting both into the crowd surrounding him sent up bellows and loud braying from all around. The larger of the two Flame Keepers issued a grunt, and waved his hand, as the large herd of beasts prepared themselves once more for battle.


As the Charr mob began to charge him once more, he quickly reached behind his back, slipping a soft leather pouch into his hand. Reclaiming his sword, the old man dug his feet into the ground and bent his knees slightly. A good balanced stance was all that was needed to survive nearly any encounter. Nearly any but this one. The massive sephis axe was gone from the floor. His quick eyes scanned the attackers, intent on finding where it had gone.


As he deflected the first heavy axe from his right, the old man saw the fireballs hover once more, as they flashed towards him, he stopped another club with his left arm. They would hit, and there was nothing he could… The first he caught with his sword, the second slipped over his guard… He turned away from the heat, the flesh of his left cheek instantly crisping and crumbling from his face. His left eye destroyed, the fireball slid past his head and exploded on the chest of the nearest Charr warrior. Swinging his blazing sword wildly around him, he gained a brief respite. It was enough. Enough to do what he came here to do. He only needed to concentrate for a second, and then it would be done. He cleared his mind, and began his defence. His feet danced an odd pattern into the floor, each step a carefully choreographed move. Each deflection sending the attackers axe or club to the floor, complete with hand and wrist in most cases. Spinning on the spot, his sword cleared a space around him as he made the last dragging of his heel across the floor, he ripped open the small leather pouch with his teeth, and scattered the bag full of little blue stones into the dust.


The holy sigil glowed a bright, eerie blue, the growing light scattering amongst the dark fur covered legs of the forest of Charr surrounding the old man. The fires on the Flame Keepers hands went out, as they turned and shouldered their way back into the crowd. A dull thump to his ribs shook his attention. As one, the Charr froze, their large brown dead eyes first looking at the warrior in unison, then the ground beneath his feet. As one, they turned and ran in all directions. A circle growing with him at its centre.


He wrenched the sephis axe from his side. Not as stupid as gargoyles then, thought the warrior. Nearly… but not quite. He meditated for a split second, and allowed the adrenaline to flow through him at five times the normal speed. Everything around him seemed to stand still for that eternal half second that always occurred when using the skill, and in an instant, he covered thirty feet and was on top of the big Charr that had cleaved open his side. Its back was turned as it ran, which made it all the easier… Flipping the sword over in his hand as he ran, he jumped to the large beasts’ back. And old warrior battle cry flashed into his mind, and he decided now would be as good a time as any to use it. One last shout of defiance, one last time letting them all know that he was their superior. That he’d won. His cracked, burnt lips parted and as he thrust the tip of his mighty blade through the rear of the large Charrs’ skull and the creature began to topple forward; at the same time the sickly blue light winked out, and left him in the black of the night once more; he bellowed with all his might:



“VICTORY IS MINE!”

James Satan
28-09-2005, 18:10
With a whining crescendo, night turned to day. The white light rushed forth to engulf the old man’s body, the heat springing through the soles of his deldrimor steel boots as if they were soled with nothing more than paper. The flesh of his lower legs and back sizzled and he suddenly realised that he was being propelled away from the blast at a speed no human could ever naturally attain. The purifying flames of light engulfed his face, and he closed his good eye, feeling the rest of the skin on his face scorch. The very air he tried to suck quickly into his throat carried the white hot pain with it. Gulping down the flames, he desperately tried not to breathe as he flew through the air… He could not hear the roar, then realised that being so close to the explosion of magic would have taken his hearing. Strange that it had not hurt.

Suddenly, the heat was gone, or a least he couldn’t feel it any more, but he was still in the air, floating almost serenely across the landscape. He opened his right eye, but it was useless- everything above and below, nothing except a blurry black. A huge plume of dust rose up around him, and he felt its grit in the wet and charred portions of his skin as it carried him up and further from the centre of the blast.

The armour on his shoulders and upper back were the first to meet the ground, and the unrelenting rock he landed on fought the dwarven spun steel for every square inch of ground that the warrior displaced… As if he had been a blazing molten meteor thumping into the ground, the rock lost the battle, and splintered in all directions, the warriors’ body ploughing a shallow trough into the surface of the ground. The old man would have groaned, had he had any air in his lungs, as the impact broke his back, snapped both his collar bones like twigs, and tore his right arm from its socket. A flash of clarity told him that the dislocation would have been easy to repair, had he still got the hand on his other arm, and the fact that he could no longer use his legs would be a definite disadvantage. He knew in an instant, as he slid over the rock and loose earth that he would die that night. If his wounds did not claim him, the scavengers would. He was hugely surprised that he had not been instantly killed by the holy explosion.

His movement slowed, the slick metal back of his platemail still sliding gently over the dusty ground until the old man felt an odd sensation. It felt like hands had taken his shoulders, and lifted him from the ground, as if someone was gently helping him sit up.

He opened his eye, but still saw nothing. Black mist swirled inside his head. Was this death? He wondered. The peaceful aftermath of white light and pain was nothing more than… His thoughts were rudely interrupted when he finally remembered to breathe in. A choking breath drawn over clenched teeth. A gurgling sound, and the sensation of warm liquid bubbling inside his chest… The pain was unlike anything he had ever felt. Red lights winked at the corners of his mind as the pain took hold of his body and reminded him that death could only be a welcome release.

Three breaths later, the pain was gone. An old warriors’ endurance trick. To separate the mind and body, and push on through even the most stupid odds. Laying still, half sat up, he let his mind clear, as his breath grew more laboured, and he concentrated on the sensations from the fingertips of his one remaining hand. It was on the ground beside him, although he could not lift his arm, he could move his hand… Rough. Sharp and wet- slimy almost... No. That was the burnt part of his other fingers. He let his mind examine the differing sensations- the arm that lifted him was now under his hand... how could… A tree. It was the root of a tree. He was laying part upright against a tree. How dignified, he thought. How unusual. He could have passed no more than two trees on his way here, and all were smoking wrecks, centuries old. This one must be sturdier than most to carry his weight up against its trunk. His lips moved slightly towards a smile. His face burnt though it was, creased in humour as he lay still and concentrated on the pulse of his heart slowly threading blood around his broken body...

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The last hours of the night passed slowly… The sky was almost clear this far north of Ascalon city, the stars more clearly visible than anywhere else in the country. They were truly beautiful, in their pinks and greens, yellows and blue hues fading in and out. Truly the god’s finest tapestries were up there in the night sky, and nowhere to be found in Tyria’s lands.

The brightening of the skies in the north signalled the dawn of a new day. Slowly, the stars disappeared into the dull grey that advanced before the sun. The wind danced lightly in the sands, casting swirling patterns as it moved and a solitary bird trilled its morning song somewhere far away. The sun rose slowly, languorously over the wastelands, burning away the early morning mists and casting long shimmering reflections in the tar pools. For the first time in two hundred years, a tiny patch of grey formed in the blue skies directly above the enormous crater, larger than the whole of regent valley, and rain began to fall gently on the plains.

The old warrior saw none of this. His mangled face was calm, and his one remaining eye was shut in the motionless, deep sleep of death.

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Epilogue

The rising sun shed its light in dirty rays through the floating dust. The black clad ranger lay near the edge of the great bowl shaped crater, a small dark spot on the sandy landscape. A glint of light on metal caught her eye… probably quarter of a mile to the west of where she lay. Her sticky fingers clenched tightly to the gaping wound in her stomach; though she always carried the healing leaves of the forest protectors, she knew that this wound was too severe for even their amazing regenerative powers. When the warrior stood atop her, she knew her only way to avoid further physical damage was to appear to die, so she used what little necromantic knowledge she had to make a blood sacrifice. She knew the effects of the magic would take her to the brink of death and back, but it was her only choice... She hauled herself unsteadily to her feet. The blood trickled slowly from the small of her back whenever she stood, and a black liquid flowed between her fingers, mixed with the normal reddish brown of blood. No necromancer trick could help her now; she knew she only had only a little time left. Her ears were still ringing from the explosion, she bled from a new, but insignificant cut to her temple, yet had she been much closer to it, she would certainly have suffered more.

It took two hours to cross the distance; twice she fell down certain that she would never regain her feet. Then after what felt an eternity, and long after the sun had begun its daily torture of beating upon the sand, she finally reached the shining object. It had shimmered in the sunlight more intensely as she approached- The sheer amount of light it reflected to her eyes, blinding her as to what it actually was until she was no more than twenty feet away.

The corpse of a blade storm warrior lay smouldering in a gigantic heap upon the ground, its limbs distorted by the blast in ways that she had never seen before. The stink of singed fur, and torn open guts reached her nostrils, both making her want to retch. The creatures’ armour was blackened by flames and non-reflective, the iron oxidised and grey. With wide eyes, she reached for the pommel of the huge, almost glowing, silver longsword that impaled the gigantic lumpy head, as if whoever stabbed this beast did so after its’ death - nailing its very head to the rock below the corpse, so that it could not be moved. Her fingers caressed the perfect leather binding of the hilt, tightened on the grip… but then she stopped. She withdrew her hand and knelt before the blade and its unwieldy sheath. She bowed her head and silently began to weep.

oney
04-01-2006, 05:52
this is one nice story but why did the girl cry at the end

James Satan
26-01-2006, 02:55
Desperation? Respect for the dead warrior after his ordeal? The sure knowledge of certain death to come, and all for a lump of gleaming, centuries old metal?

I don't know. It just seemed to fit.

You know- this version is a lot less polished than the other one I posted simply called "north of the wall-complete!"

One more story to come, but its a fair way off I'm afraid- haven't even started it outside my head.