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ZefvoneeGreff
18-08-2005, 19:51
This is my comic. About the frog.

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y213/neo_smoose/frog-comic.jpg

Sorry about it being so large.

Dakrath Ahn
19-08-2005, 00:31
Sory, but I don't get the ending. What exactly is he doing behind that plant?

Nikhera
19-08-2005, 00:45
He's hiding in shame. I mean, it's so easy to get a frog to talk. :happy53:

ZefvoneeGreff
19-08-2005, 01:04
He's supposed to be jumping on the frog since he couldn't get it to talk. The plant got in the way.

Tragedy Strikes
19-08-2005, 04:21
Lol, nice :thumbsup:

Dakrath Ahn
20-08-2005, 01:12
You shouln'tve ended it so suddenly. And besides it not even being clear that he's jumping on the frog, he doesn't even have any motive to do so. To me it looks like he was begging the the frog to talk about half a second before he jumps on it. You should've added a few panels where he gets frustrated, and then make a shot in wich it is clear that he intends to kill the frog. Like making him threaten the little ribbiter with a sword or something.

ZefvoneeGreff
20-08-2005, 01:33
I'm probably gonna redo it. *starts photoshop*