Female warrior

[Cocotroid]

http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/4767/jaschar27sq.jpg
No, I don't get bored of drawing female Guild Wars characters.

[Dakrath Ahn]

Pretty good, except for the right eye (left eye for the character, right eye from the viewer's point). Why did you cut it off? You should've just continued the rest of the eye off the head, it would've looked much better. It's not uncommon in Manga cartoons anyway Now it looks as if the eye was flat-mapped around the head. Blegh.

The chin looks kind of wierd. I think you should've extended the chin a bit, and made it a bit more...eh...pointy (?). And maybe the mouth should be a bit lower as well.

Kind of a bummer you erased the armored arm, I bet it would've looked great. If you plan on adding it, you might want to excagerate (did I spell that right?) it a bit. You know, over the top size and things like that. I think it would come out pretty cool.

Overall a pretty cool looking drawing. Keep 'em coming mate. :D

[Cocotroid]

Thanks for the constructive critisism. I'm definitely going to finish it, but for now I just cleaned it up a little:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/21997338/
Looks much better in my opinion.

[ReZon]

Very nice job 'troid! If you made a comic, I'd read it. :D

[Cocotroid]

Very nice job 'troid! If you made a comic, I'd read it. :D

Haha, I don't think I could do a comic. Why, you may ask?
1) No ideas.
2) I'm not that good.
3) Take too long. :P I'm lazy. You'd get an issue every month if you were lucky.

[Erionix Reldrin]

Very cute, esspecially the face. ^_^

- I hear you on the comic book thing. I really want to put together a manga, but I need someone to help me write. >_<

Hehe* I'm lazy too.
You're good enough though...most web comics don't start off proffesional, but always end up looking better, and better.

At least I like to tell myself that...laughs*
Anyway, I really like your drawings. :happy34:

[Cocotroid]

Thankee. Aha! We should do a webcomic together! Err... Nice smiley things in your post title... <_<