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    Quote Originally Posted by Kalidri View Post
    - Be aware of homophones, I have this same problem and I see you used 'their' instead of 'there' in one spot.
    Personally, I can't stress this one enough. Now I know that my opinion is sort of obsolete as I can't bring up the courage to write something (or rather, post it), and english isn't my native language..

    But I go crazy because of..

    Are instead of Our
    There instead of Their
    Their instead of They're
    Then instead of Than (to a lesser extend)
    Effect instead of Aff... okay now I'm just nitpicking ^_^

    But yeah, you need a good 'hook' to start off with. Don't overdo it though, subtle can be good too!

    Less is more, or was it the other way around..? Then again it would be the same anyway.

    Other than that, take your time really. You don't have to have 30+ chapters up in one day, orso.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lily Levant View Post
    Personally, I can't stress this one enough. Now I know that my opinion is sort of obsolete as I can't bring up the courage to write something (or rather, post it), and english isn't my native language..

    But I go crazy because of..

    Are instead of Our
    There instead of Their
    Their instead of They're
    Then instead of Than (to a lesser extend)
    Effect instead of Aff... okay now I'm just nitpicking ^_^

    But yeah, you need a good 'hook' to start off with. Don't overdo it though, subtle can be good too!

    Less is more, or was it the other way around..? Then again it would be the same anyway.

    Other than that, take your time really. You don't have to have 30+ chapters up in one day, orso.
    don't forget the ever-popular Your instead of You're.


    oh, and welcome to the forum, sir.

  3. #1023
    Maybe a good read outside of WOW could help you put the imagination and fantasy back into gear.
    Fiction based on history: Unintended Consequences by John Ross
    Not everything to learn about earthly evil creatures: Monster Hunter International by Larry Correia

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    I'm thinking of using my version of my favorite fight scene in Naruto Shippuden

    oh and one thing I'm kinda 'recycling' the four bosses from the Dzagonur Bastion mission

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    He, what about Palawa Joko, evry one forgets about him.
    He's building an army, just wright that he finished that army... Muhaha

  6. #1026
    I haven't forgotten about him. He is in the second and fifth part of the story I am currently writing. Of course, each "part" is basically it's only story. :x

    Currently writing Chapter 2, don't want to put anything up until I know I can update at least once a week without being inconsistant; i.e., I'll probably finish "book 1" before posting the first chapter of it.

  7. #1027
    anyone know of a large one entrance cave on the tarnished coast not including dungeons

  8. #1028
    Rapter Cave

    Where the Destroyers show up in G.O.L.E.M.

    The underground temple in Arbor Bay

    The Spider Tunnel

  9. #1029
    Quote Originally Posted by Konig Des Todes View Post

    Where the Destroyers show up in G.O.L.E.M.
    thats a cave?

    Quote Originally Posted by Konig Des Todes View Post

    The underground temple in Arbor Bay
    not really 1 entrance but that would suffice

    still need to serch for any in Alcazia tangle

  10. #1030
    I've merged york's and karn's threads into the Lounge. Since neither thread is a work of fiction, both of them really belong up in the lounge where random conversations about writer's block and introductions can thrive.

    Just keeping things tidy and did not want to set a precedent for random threads without writing in them.

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