But I go crazy because of..
Are instead of Our
There instead of Their
Their instead of They're
Then instead of Than (to a lesser extend)
Effect instead of Aff... okay now I'm just nitpicking ^_^
But yeah, you need a good 'hook' to start off with. Don't overdo it though, subtle can be good too!
Less is more, or was it the other way around..? Then again it would be the same anyway.
Other than that, take your time really. You don't have to have 30+ chapters up in one day, orso.
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03-12-2008, 23:05 #1021
04-12-2008, 03:21 #1022
04-12-2008, 21:46 #1023
Maybe a good read outside of WOW could help you put the imagination and fantasy back into gear.
Fiction based on history: Unintended Consequences by John Ross
Not everything to learn about earthly evil creatures: Monster Hunter International by Larry Correia
04-12-2008, 22:24 #1024
I'm thinking of using my version of my favorite fight scene in Naruto Shippuden
oh and one thing I'm kinda 'recycling' the four bosses from the Dzagonur Bastion mission
05-12-2008, 06:14 #1025
He, what about Palawa Joko, evry one forgets about him.
He's building an army, just wright that he finished that army... Muhaha
05-12-2008, 10:19 #1026
I haven't forgotten about him. He is in the second and fifth part of the story I am currently writing. Of course, each "part" is basically it's only story. :x
Currently writing Chapter 2, don't want to put anything up until I know I can update at least once a week without being inconsistant; i.e., I'll probably finish "book 1" before posting the first chapter of it.
05-12-2008, 19:24 #1027
anyone know of a large one entrance cave on the tarnished coast not including dungeons
06-12-2008, 00:28 #1028
Where the Destroyers show up in G.O.L.E.M.
The underground temple in Arbor Bay
The Spider Tunnel
06-12-2008, 00:37 #1029
06-12-2008, 01:47 #1030
I've merged york's and karn's threads into the Lounge. Since neither thread is a work of fiction, both of them really belong up in the lounge where random conversations about writer's block and introductions can thrive.
Just keeping things tidy and did not want to set a precedent for random threads without writing in them.