And sorry, the spider tunnel I said, that's not a tunnel but a chasm with very thick trees overhead.
The only one there, iirc, is the tunnel to the mini lab where you rescue Renk (I think that's his name) from destroyers in the storyline. Which isn't much of a tunnel, more like a thick arch.Originally Posted by Karn the Betrayer
I decided that I should add some pictures to my story, as others have liked threads I made better when there are images to break text more than other threads.
SO, I need some help with a few things. First, I need to find out:
-location of a cave in Vabbi (preferably near Skree)
-a ragged-clothes like armor (combination or set) for male necromancer
-a desert-like coast (meant to be the coast of the Crystal Sea)
Both concept art and areas in-game will work, I just need pictures.
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06-12-2008, 03:35 #1031
Last edited by Konig Des Todes; 06-12-2008 at 05:29.
06-12-2008, 08:53 #1032
06-12-2008, 10:20 #1033
A good way to break up text is a few (but not too many) pictures, which is why I am planning on doing that. As not only do they break up text, but they give the brain a quick rest of reading without thinking about taking a break.
06-12-2008, 10:55 #1034
for my story even before i start wriiting it (i got bad writers block ATM) i jot down as notes (which most of us do anyway) looks like I have to make up a cave (in Alcazia Tangle) for my story... I'm even putting in a mini side story of a romance between Gwen and one of her Ebon Vanguard colleuges < (bad spelling) who happens to be a childhood friend whom got rescued by Capt Langmar after the searing... unlike Gwen who got captured by the pesky charr (note to self: Remeber to equip a weapon when running into a charr mob in their homelands..... EPIC FAIL, Hilaious but at least i got req 5 vanguard for doing so lolz)
06-12-2008, 12:48 #1035
Okay, so I edited the whole story... almost as much a grind as getting through NF - . And I added a Prologue, after battling with it for months. If I've learnt anything we'll have to wait and see. Please let me have any criticism
07-12-2008, 01:51 #1036
07-12-2008, 02:49 #1037
Robert Heinlein's Five Rules of Writing + A Rule by Robert J. Sawyer
Originally Posted by Robert Heinlein
Last edited by jciardha; 07-12-2008 at 02:54.
07-12-2008, 10:16 #1038
thats why i take notes... JK Rowling dose when she is AFK
Rule Three: You Must Refrain From Rewriting, Except to Editorial Order
not relivant since i aint selling XD but still:
Notice that this is a "Disposable Copy" if you only want the editor's reply but not the actual manuscript returned
Last edited by Karn the Betrayer; 07-12-2008 at 10:24.
07-12-2008, 11:04 #1039
07-12-2008, 11:15 #1040