This is the first Guild Wars fanfiction I have ever done. I thought I'd give it a try; it looks quite fun.
She silently regarded the two Margonites with cold, calculating blue-green eyes. The six-eyed humanoids did not scare her, unlike most mortals the Margonites brought into the Realm of Torment. The silver-white haired girl seemed young, but far from foolish.
"You will be her caretaker," the other Margonite told Chimor respectfully.
Chimor the Lightblooded fixed the mortal female with four of his eyes, and she raised her face to his gaze. She did not look him in the eye, her own gaze fixed on where his nose would approximately be.
"Her name will be Kai," the Margonite continued, idly resting her scythe on her armored shoulder. "When she is old enough, she will be our spy in the mortal realms. One of us would be slain on sight, but a lone girl just might be spared."
Chimor sighed. "So is she another of our kind, or a mortal? I have no time to waste babysitting mere mortals."
The Margonite Reaper smiled smugly. "You see the perfectly symmetric markings on her forehead, and the glow in her eyes? She is mortal in appearance, but deep down, she is one of us. Her Margonite form will reveal itself in due time."
"Will she be doomed to the Foundry of Failed Creations like Razah?"
"Not likely. Her...creators... were much more thoughtful when she was made. Hopefully, she will succeed - and through her, we will take the mortal realm for ourselves."
Kai spent six years under Chimor's care. He was mentor, teacher, and father to her. However, she distanced herself from the other Margonites. They were mostly curious of her, constantly poking and examining her with their violet stares. None would harm or bully her, otherwise they would face Chimor's wrath. Despite her upbringing, she didn't hate the mortals. She was intensely interested in them, ravaging the libraries to read everything she could about them.
Unfortunately, she also discovered how to leave the Realm of Torment while delving into the old books. Curiousity drove her to venture from the only land she had ever known.
After some analysis, she reasoned that it would be best if she snuck out to explore the coveted "mortal realms" alone. While the Margonites did not confine her, she was expressly discouraged from adventuring too far from Chimor's fortress.
She slipped through the shadowy halls of the fortress, carefully avoiding the patrols. Being caught would mean some form of punishment. Kai stuck to the cliff wall, sneaking through the darkness, until she reached one of the "Gates to the Mortal Realm."
It was huge, a swirling black vortex with a purple center. I'll just take a look around. I won't be gone for too long. They won't even miss me, she thought. Extending her hand, pale from the lack of sunlight in the Realm of Torment, she touched the vortex.
Wind rushed in her ears for a second, and she stood on a sandy plain. Harsh, blinding brilliance beat down from above. Narrow brown towers with green auras around them dotted the plain. A four-legged scaly creature crawled past her.
When her eyes adjusted to the light, she took a quick look around. The sky was a beautiful shade of blue, not the gloomy gray she was used to. There's my little look around. Time to go back. She turned around, but the vortex that she had entered this strange, bright realm from was gone.
She experienced a moment of panic. Did time pass differently here than back home? Would she be able to spend years here and return to the Realm of Torment without a minute going by? Or had years passed in her homeland while she had only been here a minute?
There is no use worrying. I'm stuck here, and I need to find a way back. She squinted against the light, and barely made out some walls in the distance. Structures meant civilization, she remembered, and aimlessly wandered towards the walls.
So... there's chapter one. How is it? I'm not very good at writing I'm afraid. Comments, feedback, and suggestion welcome.